This is a great piece of work! It is especially important to remind people of the homeless issue in Toronto in winter days. And your blog is well constructed to demonstrate that purpose. You started the blog by sharing the facts and background information on the issue. Then you move on to give 2 true stories of the homeless children who are just at our ages. The stories are the best of this blog in my opinion as it has the ability to make people feel related. Then people may try to figure out ways to help, so your next paragraph comes in time giving people suggestions such as donating clothing to improve the current situation. Overall, your post is well organized and easy to follow, I had a good time reading your blog!
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